Correct my English please-B?
Tell my any mistakes!
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CAN website has been operating booking of 23,000 of overseas hotels with the online reservation system provided by Gulliver Travel Associates, with its head office in London, England (“GTA”), and affiliate advertisings. It has steadily increased its service. To further expand its service area and increase the sales volume, TNA plans to develop an original system for overseas hotel booking.
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The CAN website has been operating the booking of 23,000 overseas hotels with the online reservation system provided by Gulliver Travel Associates, with its head office in London, England ("GTA") and affiliate advertising. It has steadily increased its (quality of service? this needs to be more clear). To further expand its service area and increase its sales volume, TNA plans to develop an original system for overseas hotel booking.
Not very many mistakes.
Comment from Brian W
Time December 18, 2009 at 7:07 pm
The CAN website has been operating the booking of 23,000 overseas hotels with the online reservation system provided by Gulliver Travel Associates, with its head office in London, England ("GTA") and affiliate advertising. It has steadily increased its (quality of service? this needs to be more clear). To further expand its service area and increase its sales volume, TNA plans to develop an original system for overseas hotel booking.
Not very many mistakes.
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